The Leap

(What If? Exercise: Read the description here.)

He had been dreaming of this day his entire life.

The day when he could finally see the world.

The time had come to leave the nest.

He stood tall and spread his wings.

Then he leapt from the branch.

The long fall was daunting.

But his spirit prevailed.

The sky called.

He flew.

Free.


This piece is based on What If? Exercise 93: “Ten to One”. The exercise is to write a 55-word story in which the first sentence has ten words, the second has nine, etc., until the last sentence has only one word. The objective is to show that precision and thrift in writing can produce surprisingly powerful results. I hope you enjoy what I’ve written. Thanks for reading!

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10 Inspirational Writing Quotes for NaNoWriMo

It’s the first week of National Novel Writing Month, and you know what that means: time to finally sit down and write that novel! Of course, this is much easier said than done, but hammering out 50,000 words in 30 days, daunting as it may seem, is certainly possible. Sometimes all you need to get started on reaching that goal is a bit of motivation.

So to help start you off on your NaNoWriMo journey, here are 10 tips on writing in the form of inspirational quotes from famous authors. Enjoy, and best of luck in this year’s NaNoWriMo!

NaNoWriMo_Keep_Calm1) Be ruthless about protecting writing days, i.e. do not cave in to endless requests to have “essential” and “long overdue” meetings on those days.J.K. Rowling

2) If you don’t have time to read, you don’t have the time (or the tools) to write. Simple as that.Stephen King

3) This is how you do it: you sit down at the keyboard and you put one word after another until it’s done. It’s that easy, and that hard.Neil Gaiman

4) No tears in the writer, no tears in the reader. No surprise in the writer, no surprise in the reader.Robert Frost

5) The best time for planning a book is while you’re doing the dishes.Agatha Christie

6) Substitute ‘damn’ every time you’re inclined to write ‘very’; your editor will delete it and the writing will be just as it should be.Mark Twain

7) Don’t tell me the moon is shining; show me the glint of light on broken glass.Anton Chekhov

8) There is nothing to writing. All you do is sit down at a typewriter and bleed.Ernest Hemingway

9) You must stay drunk on writing so reality cannot destroy you.Ray Bradbury

10) If there’s a book that you want to read, but it hasn’t been written yet, then you must write it.Toni Morrison

What are your thoughts on these inspirational writing quotes? Any other favorites you would add to this list?

Word of the Week: Superfluous

Word: superfluous

Pronunciation: soo-PƏR-flə-wəs

Part of Speech: adjective

Definition: unnecessary, especially through being more than enough

Source: Oxford Dictionaries


Today’s Word of the Week is a good one to know for unsatisfactory writing. Often when a writer goes overboard with the descriptions in their fiction, it detracts from the action of their story. In this case, an editor or reviewer could say the detail in the story is “superfluous”, as it has crossed a limit into being unnecessarily wordy. Writers beware: detailed descriptions are fine, but you never want them to be excessively elaborate!

To be “superfluous” is to be excessive and thus unnecessary. The word arose in late Middle English and comes from the Latin adjective superfluus, meaning “in excess”. This adjective comprises the preposition super “over” and the verb fluere “to flow”.

With its roots in the Latin words for “over” and “flow”, it’s no wonder the adjective “superfluous” easily brings to mind the image of water overflowing. While it doesn’t necessarily have to apply to liquid, this image does make it easier to memorize the word’s definition of excess. Whether you’re describing too many objects or too many ideas, “superfluous” is a good word to keep in mind for anything that’s more than necessary. Have fun writing about the “superfluous” things in your stories; just take care not to use “superfluous” detail in your narrative! Good luck!

What are your thoughts on this word? Any suggestions for future “Word of the Week” featured words?

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