Beautiful Brown Eyes
As I lay back on the bed
And you lay over me,
I look up at your face
Smiling down at me,
And I think to myself,
He has such beautiful eyes.
Dark brown eyes,
So warm and inviting.
When they look into mine,
I can see the love in them,
The kindness,
The humility,
The passion.
And when I look back into them,
I feel at peace.
Those eyes say so much
Even when his lips
Don’t say a word.
They tell me such sweet things:
I adore you,
I want you,
I need you,
I love you.
And they always perfectly match
The feelings in my heart.
I know those eyes
Belong to a man
Who cares for me,
Who respects me,
Who treats me well and
Who loves me
With all his heart.
And I know that when I’m with him,
I am home.
All this takes but a second
To cross my mind,
But that one second
Is more than enough.
I smile back up at you,
Pull you close,
And kiss your lips,
Elated to know that
Only I will ever see
The true depth of the love
In your beautiful brown eyes.
Happy Birthday to my adoring boyfriend! Thank you for filling my days with so much happiness and love! I love you, sweetheart!
What If? Writing Prompts: Romance IV
My apologies; looks like grad school work has me swamped again, so how about a couple more rounds of “What If?” Writing Prompts to tide over my creative writing posts this month? This week’s batch features yet another set of romance prompts. See what new tales you can spin around the theme of love! Enjoy!
What if… you knew the person you were going to marry someday was already in your life… but you didn’t yet know who it was?
What if… you realized you had a crush on one of your closest friends?
What if… you and your sibling liked the same person?
What if… the person you were destined to be with came into your life the day after you swore never to love again?
What if… you fell in love with someone you had never met in person?
Good luck writing your own romantic stories!
If you have any “What If?” writing prompt suggestions (for any theme), please feel free to share them in the comments below. Ideas I like may be featured in future “What If?” posts, with full credit and a link to your blog (if you have one)! Also, if you’ve written a piece based on an idea you’ve found here, be sure to link back to the respective “What If?” post. I would love to see what you’ve done with the prompt! Thank you!
Word of the Week: Paucity
Word: paucity
Pronunciation: PAH-si-tee
Part of Speech: noun
Definition: the presence of something only in small or insufficient quantities or amounts; scarcity
Source: Oxford Dictionaries
Continuing from last week’s theme of advanced forms of common words, today’s vocabulary post features another word that you’re much less likely to see than its everyday counterpart. After all, when was the last time you heard someone refer to a lacking amount of something as a “paucity” as opposed to a “scarcity”? It’s another word that came up in a presentation at the scientific conference I attended, but I have yet to see it much in fiction!
A “paucity” of something is a small or insufficient amount or quantity of it. The word arose in late Middle English and can be traced back through the Old French noun paucite to the Latin noun paucitas, meaning “a small number”. This noun comes from the adjective paucus, which means “few”.
Coincidentally, “paucity” is a word that I’ve used very few times myself, if ever. I read it occasionally in academic writing (such as in papers that describe a “paucity” of a particular species in a region), but in the right contexts, I believe it works just as well in fiction. If your characters often encounter lacking quantities or amounts of the things they need (and you’ve already overused more common words like “scarcity”), you may want to consider writing about the “paucity” of their necessities in your stories! Good luck!
What are your thoughts on this word? Any suggestions for future “Word of the Week” featured words?
Rescue
(What If? Exercise: Read the description here.)
Sharon was the first to spot him in the water.
No one else noticed the little boy was drowning.
But the lifeguard had him out in seconds.
She gave him CPR on the beach.
The crowd watched with bated breath…
Then the boy’s mother cried.
His chest was moving.
The people cheered.
Sharon smiled.
This piece is based on What If? Exercise 93: “Ten to One”. The exercise is to write a 55-word story in which the first sentence has ten words, the second has nine, etc., until the last sentence has only one word. The objective is to show that precision and thrift in writing can produce surprisingly powerful results. I hope you enjoy what I’ve written. Thanks for reading!
What If? Writing Prompts: Humor II
I hope you’re up for some more “What If?” Writing Prompts! For a lighter theme this week, today’s set features more prompts in the humor genre. See what funny tales you can spin around these ideas, and feel free to add more of your own! Enjoy!
What if… you woke up one day to find your life were the setting of a movie?
What if… you set up a camera in your house to find out what your pets do when you’re not home?
What if… you knew an animal that talked… but only when you were both alone?
What if… your school/workplace turned into a circus for a day?
What if… there were a strange disease going around that randomly gave people the urge to sing and dance?
Have fun writing your own silly stories!
If you have any “What If?” writing prompt suggestions (for any theme), please feel free to share them in the comments below. Ideas I like may be featured in future “What If?” posts, with full credit and a link to your blog (if you have one)! Also, if you’ve written a piece based on an idea you’ve found here, be sure to link back to the respective “What If?” post. I would love to see what you’ve done with the prompt! Thank you!

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